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Mary Sue Test: Kimiko Tokiya/Akemi Miyama 
Idk why I'm doing this, I'm just bored I guess o3o I wanted to see where I am with her, and if I need to improve her or not. No one has said she's a Mary Sue, I just want to do this for myself. Taken from: jochannon 

Appearance


[ ] They have a rare hair/fur color
[x] Their eyes are an unusual color {Gray}
[ ] This happens to be red
[ ] Their eyes change color
[ ] (if female) they have large boobs
[ ] (if male) they are very muscular
[ ] They are very attractive to the opposite gender
[ ] They are very attractive to the same gender
[x] They have lots of friends/no friends {No friends}
[ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[ ] They have a guardian spirit 
[ ] Some part of their body glows(that isn't supposed to glow in their species/race)
[x] They are emo/cutesy {Cutesy}
[ ] They have wings 
[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'
[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[ ] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear

Subtotal: 3

Relations

[ ] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth
[ ] They have an evil nemesis
[ ] Who is their sibling
[ ] They are from a very poor/lowly family
[ ] They are from a very rich/royal family
[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[ ] They have lost one/both of their parents
[ ] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death/s
[ ] Who were killed by the OC's arch nemesis
[x] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc. {Uncaring}
[ ] So they ran away from home, and somehow fell in with a famous hero, or bumped into an infamous villain who promptly became their arch nemesis
[ ] Their parents were fine, but they ran away from home anyway, seeking adventure
[ ] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[ ] They never knew their parents
[x] They were abused/spoiled as a child {Not really, but she was always alone as a younger child, she's 7 years old currently}
[ ] They are currently in a relationship

Subtotal: 2

Race/Species

[ ] They are possessed by an angel
[ ] They are possessed by a demon
[ ] But they struggle to be good anyway
[ ] They are a mythical creature
[ ] They are an alien
[ ] They are part mythical creature
[ ] They are part alien
[ ] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[ ] They are a mythical creature/alien who was raised by human parents
[ ] And they grew up thinking they were human
[ ] They are the last of their kind

Double your points if they are descended from two or more kinds of mythical creatures/aliens

Subtotal: 0 {Kimiko/Akemi is human}

Powers

[ ] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[ ] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[ ] They have a special ability/power
[ ] But they don't know about it yet
[ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[ ] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift 
[ ] They are immortal(cannot be killed by conventional means)
[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc. 
[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul
[ ] Their soul is not the same as them
[ ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts (Anyone can talk TO spirits; it's getting them to talk back that is the hard part)
[ ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[x] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown {Kind of? I mean, she is claustrophobic}

Subtotal: 1

Mentality

[ ] They have a mental disorder
[ ] They have an emotional disorder
[ ] They struggle to stay sane
[ ] They talk about their struggle to stay sane a lot
[ ] They are a psycho
[ ] They have multiple personalities(x2 if this is shown to be funny)
[x] They are intelligent {She is a hacker and knows a lot about computers}
[ ] They are not smart, but in a funny way, and somehow always manage to find the hidden switch/secret door
[ ] They have hallucinations
[ ] They are very mysterious/dark
[ ] They are very lively/happy
[ ] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[ ] They are very patient

Subtotal: 1

Miscellaneous

[x] They are physically strong
[ ] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit. For example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[ ] They have a rare/unusual name
[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummer's Night, The Winter Solstice, etc.
[ ] They are connected with a certain element
[ ] They are connected with a certain animal
[ ] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[ ] They are hiding from someone/something
[ ] They have a rare blood type 
[ ] They cry blood
[ ] They are from a different country to where they live
[ ] They are from a long line of ninjas/magical princesses/paladins/ad nauseum
[ ] They come from two such lines
[ ] Which have been at war for all of history
[ ] But are now at peace because of the OCs parents who loved each other in defiance of their families' hatred, showing them there was a better way (my god, I can't count how many time I've seen this)
[ ] They have amnesia
[ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[ ] The have a curse upon them
[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[ ] They are 'the chosen one'

Subtotal: 1

Total: 8


Point Reductions

Take points off your OC's overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

[ ] They smoke
[ ] They are an alcoholic
[ ] They are overweight
[ ] They are addicted to drugs
[x] They have a short temper
[ ] They enjoy bullying others
[ ] They do not care much about others
[ ] They are emotionless
[ ] They are stupid, in an unfunny way
[ ] They are unattractive

Total Reduction: 1


Final Total: 7


Less than 5 - Anti-Sue
Your character may be a bit on the boring side. No reason a character scoring this low can't be a a fascinating and exciting character, but generally if they are scoring this low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit.


6-15 - Balanced Character
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.


16-25 - Borderline Mary-Sue
You probably need to tone your character down; characters that score this high tend to annoy people.


More than 26 - Mary-Sue 


^-^ She's a balanced character~ I definitely tried to make her interesting, I did not change her when writing this though. I used what I had, and still have because it doesn't need any changes.
Akemi Miyama/Kimiko Tokiya by SailorSnowflake
Akemi Miyama/Kimiko Tokiya
This is an OC of mine ^^ Oh btw, she's not a chibi in this drawing, she's a 7 year old girl xD
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Quick Kiss Study by SailorSnowflake
Quick Kiss Study
A new pose I tried and experimented with. I would appreciate tips on how to improve, and I do need them ^^ This pose is going to be part of a drawing I'm making soon, so please, I would like your help~
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Ai Haibara by SailorSnowflake
Ai Haibara
I just felt like drawing Ai once again XD I am obsessed with Detective Conan right now lol I actually tried lineart, and a different pose than what I'm used to. The arms annoyed me so much, I kept trying to redraw them, but I got tired and just left them like that e.e
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Should I make a closed species? I really want to >.< Any ideas for a species?

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I know my art needs improvement. You don't need to keep telling me that, I don't have all this fancy art stuff anyone else has. So what? :U Deal with it.

Also, I don't draw or write (Though Hetalia is ok sometimes) nudity or inappropriate stuff. And for those of you who know Free Realms, I'm Redachu~

Any profile pic I use belongs to their rightful owners. But if I use my own deviation, then it would be my own.

One more thing: I don't allow art theft. Do not steal any of my artwork. (But I don't consider bases as art theft) Neither do I allow chain mail spam messages. Those will be flagged as spam.

Commissions:
Adoptables: 100 points (Can be anything but a pony since I can't draw those)
Digital Drawings: 200 points (Can be a chibi, full body, drawing of your OC, a background, an animal, a Vocaloid or anime character, a tv character, a book character, or a slug (For the Slugterra lovers~)
Traditional Drawings: Without color - 200 points, With color - 300 points (Same as digital drawings)
Headshots: 200 points (Same as digital drawings, can be traditional or digital)
Wing Design: 300 points (This is a wing design for a faerie OC of any kind, and the design can be any kind, can be traditional or digital)

Art Trades: Open, free
Requests: Open, free, (Bases are available and are free as well, other people can use them too, and credit me - these bases will be my own drawn bases and NOT traced or made from anime/shows)
Interests
Mary Sue Test: Kimiko Tokiya/Akemi Miyama 
Idk why I'm doing this, I'm just bored I guess o3o I wanted to see where I am with her, and if I need to improve her or not. No one has said she's a Mary Sue, I just want to do this for myself. Taken from: jochannon 

Appearance


[ ] They have a rare hair/fur color
[x] Their eyes are an unusual color {Gray}
[ ] This happens to be red
[ ] Their eyes change color
[ ] (if female) they have large boobs
[ ] (if male) they are very muscular
[ ] They are very attractive to the opposite gender
[ ] They are very attractive to the same gender
[x] They have lots of friends/no friends {No friends}
[ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[ ] They have a guardian spirit 
[ ] Some part of their body glows(that isn't supposed to glow in their species/race)
[x] They are emo/cutesy {Cutesy}
[ ] They have wings 
[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'
[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[ ] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear

Subtotal: 3

Relations

[ ] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth
[ ] They have an evil nemesis
[ ] Who is their sibling
[ ] They are from a very poor/lowly family
[ ] They are from a very rich/royal family
[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[ ] They have lost one/both of their parents
[ ] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death/s
[ ] Who were killed by the OC's arch nemesis
[x] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc. {Uncaring}
[ ] So they ran away from home, and somehow fell in with a famous hero, or bumped into an infamous villain who promptly became their arch nemesis
[ ] Their parents were fine, but they ran away from home anyway, seeking adventure
[ ] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[ ] They never knew their parents
[x] They were abused/spoiled as a child {Not really, but she was always alone as a younger child, she's 7 years old currently}
[ ] They are currently in a relationship

Subtotal: 2

Race/Species

[ ] They are possessed by an angel
[ ] They are possessed by a demon
[ ] But they struggle to be good anyway
[ ] They are a mythical creature
[ ] They are an alien
[ ] They are part mythical creature
[ ] They are part alien
[ ] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[ ] They are a mythical creature/alien who was raised by human parents
[ ] And they grew up thinking they were human
[ ] They are the last of their kind

Double your points if they are descended from two or more kinds of mythical creatures/aliens

Subtotal: 0 {Kimiko/Akemi is human}

Powers

[ ] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[ ] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[ ] They have a special ability/power
[ ] But they don't know about it yet
[ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[ ] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift 
[ ] They are immortal(cannot be killed by conventional means)
[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc. 
[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul
[ ] Their soul is not the same as them
[ ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts (Anyone can talk TO spirits; it's getting them to talk back that is the hard part)
[ ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[x] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown {Kind of? I mean, she is claustrophobic}

Subtotal: 1

Mentality

[ ] They have a mental disorder
[ ] They have an emotional disorder
[ ] They struggle to stay sane
[ ] They talk about their struggle to stay sane a lot
[ ] They are a psycho
[ ] They have multiple personalities(x2 if this is shown to be funny)
[x] They are intelligent {She is a hacker and knows a lot about computers}
[ ] They are not smart, but in a funny way, and somehow always manage to find the hidden switch/secret door
[ ] They have hallucinations
[ ] They are very mysterious/dark
[ ] They are very lively/happy
[ ] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[ ] They are very patient

Subtotal: 1

Miscellaneous

[x] They are physically strong
[ ] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit. For example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[ ] They have a rare/unusual name
[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummer's Night, The Winter Solstice, etc.
[ ] They are connected with a certain element
[ ] They are connected with a certain animal
[ ] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[ ] They are hiding from someone/something
[ ] They have a rare blood type 
[ ] They cry blood
[ ] They are from a different country to where they live
[ ] They are from a long line of ninjas/magical princesses/paladins/ad nauseum
[ ] They come from two such lines
[ ] Which have been at war for all of history
[ ] But are now at peace because of the OCs parents who loved each other in defiance of their families' hatred, showing them there was a better way (my god, I can't count how many time I've seen this)
[ ] They have amnesia
[ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[ ] The have a curse upon them
[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[ ] They are 'the chosen one'

Subtotal: 1

Total: 8


Point Reductions

Take points off your OC's overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

[ ] They smoke
[ ] They are an alcoholic
[ ] They are overweight
[ ] They are addicted to drugs
[x] They have a short temper
[ ] They enjoy bullying others
[ ] They do not care much about others
[ ] They are emotionless
[ ] They are stupid, in an unfunny way
[ ] They are unattractive

Total Reduction: 1


Final Total: 7


Less than 5 - Anti-Sue
Your character may be a bit on the boring side. No reason a character scoring this low can't be a a fascinating and exciting character, but generally if they are scoring this low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit.


6-15 - Balanced Character
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.


16-25 - Borderline Mary-Sue
You probably need to tone your character down; characters that score this high tend to annoy people.


More than 26 - Mary-Sue 


^-^ She's a balanced character~ I definitely tried to make her interesting, I did not change her when writing this though. I used what I had, and still have because it doesn't need any changes.

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Hi there! Thank you so much for the watch~! Pika Box- Love 
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Hi and np ^^ Aww, Pikachu~
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Np ^^ I really like your art and hope you like mine too~
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Thanks for the watch!
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Np ^^
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^-^
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